Here is the revised version of my song Haircut. I lined up the guitars, bass and percussion with the drums and cleaned everything up a bit. There was a lot of noise in the vocal track, but when I cut it out completely after every phrase, it was very noticeable and awkward so I automated a lot of the noise in the silence down, but I didn’t cut it out completely. Let me know what you think of this version!
Shut Down Draft 2 wit Vocals
Lyrics:
Shut down, can anyone believe it
Take a look now so you can see it
Look around you, what do you see?
a 60 year old man acting 3
Put your microphone down now
you speak, I don't even know how
you stand there yelling and screamin
Acting like you know what we're thinking
You won't stop at the boarders
You won't stop at the seas
You won't stop till Earth's 200 degrees
Wake up when will we see
We live in a society thats not really free
Take a stand or get up and leave
Say goodbye to the land of the free
Sick and tired of hearing you breath
Yeah right this is the land of the free!
Rose & Thorne -Strib
I wasn’t enjoying working with my earlier draft, so I started fresh and created something new. I have yet to add some vocals to the beginning of the track.
Lyrics:
He was called to be
In the company
of those who would
not tell the difference…
between a thorn and a rose
between a thorn and a rose
That Where I’m Good At- Jacinto Sims II
Lyrics:
You think that you know me, but you really don’t know me that well.
I just got to show you that my life is treating me so well.
Broke a lot of promises and there’s gonna be payback for that.
But you know my story and I guess thats Where Im Good At.
Yeah Thats Where Im Good At
You think that you know me that well, but you don’t know me right at all
I just got some stories to tell, but
I guess now is the time for the fall
Yeah Thats Where Im Good At
Derisa’s 4th draft
Booga Dukem – Droppin’ Bloms
This is pretty rough; I fully plan on polishing it further, so gimme them rough critiques. Hope ya’ll like this hot pile of trap garbage! Enjoy 😀
Lyrics:
Ice in my lean yuh,
Ice in my veins,
Ice in my steez yuh,
Ice in my brain,
Ice in my freezer,
Icin’ my pain,
Bitch who you playin’ with,
Shit, ain’t you game? (X2)
Poppin’ them pills I’m on set,
You got a stick I got lead,
I told you I’m fucked in the head,
Step at me you already dead,
I’m fuckin’ yo bitch in my bed,
I suck on her tits she give head,
She come when I choke on her neck,
She takin’ that dick like we wed.
GET FUCKED FUCKED UP (x3)
GET FUCKED YUH
GET FUCKED FUCKED UP (x3)
GET FUCKED YUH
GET FUCKED UP (x2)
Breakdown:
Skrrra
Gra Bra Dra
Skipatidipatida
Skrubububububuda (Skrrrt)
Skrubududub
Skrubububa
Krakkakabakakaga
Grra Grra Grra Grra Brra Brra Brra
Let’s fukken’ go
Split ya head open like a cantelope,
Tie a rope around ya throat,
Drag ya ass until ya choke, uh yea bitch,
I don’t give a fuck about ya hope,
Got my head full a dope,
Doped up, woke up like I don’t even know it,
Do this shit for low, down low,
Stones throw from ya home,
Ya I’m home grown,
Growin’ grass and smokin hoes,
Blowin’ O’s tokin’ bowls,
Broken bones, I’m breaking bones,
Awoken soul I’m workin’ dull,
This dollar bill ain’t working tho
Ice in my lean yuh,
Ice in my veins,
Ice in my steez yuh,
Ice in my brain,
Ice in my freezer,
Icin’ my pain,
Bitch who you playin’ with,
Shit, ain’t you game? (X2)
Man, fuck this shit
Taylor – Haircut
Lyrics:
The things we don’t talk about anymore
Are always harder to ignore
We could pretend it’s all okay, but I won’t know what’s on my mind this time, this time
This time, last time I saw you I almost didn’t recognize you
Cut your hair and I grew mine
I think about you all the time
If you could just make up your mind, we would save a lot of time
Try to find someone else to take the blame
Maybe I’m just going insane
Ian – Dug My Grave
How Can – J Roe
Vocals need re-tracked.
