THIS INTRO IS SICK! In love the beat because it sounds like someone digging and dumping dirt on to a casket. That’s sick. The chord choices are great! Maybe try rearranging them on different parts of the piano?
I like the sounds you used, but I think it could use some development. Adding the vocals may help with this, but I think you could add some more textures as the piece develops
I dig the rhythm of the shovel (btw, LOVE this usage) but I think that section is just maybe a cycle or 2 too long, experiment with that a bit. If I close my eyes I feel like I can see the countryside; it feels like it’s crying lightly and smiling at the same time. This section goes just a bit too long as well I think, but I dig whatcha got. Looking forward to more.
THIS INTRO IS SICK! In love the beat because it sounds like someone digging and dumping dirt on to a casket. That’s sick. The chord choices are great! Maybe try rearranging them on different parts of the piano?
I like the sounds you used, but I think it could use some development. Adding the vocals may help with this, but I think you could add some more textures as the piece develops
I dig the rhythm of the shovel (btw, LOVE this usage) but I think that section is just maybe a cycle or 2 too long, experiment with that a bit. If I close my eyes I feel like I can see the countryside; it feels like it’s crying lightly and smiling at the same time. This section goes just a bit too long as well I think, but I dig whatcha got. Looking forward to more.
I like the overall ambiance. The sounds were very creative!
It needs more instrumentation and complexity.
But it was great overall, keep it up!