I wasn’t enjoying working with my earlier draft, so I started fresh and created something new. I have yet to add some vocals to the beginning of the track.
Lyrics:
He was called to be
In the company
of those who would
not tell the difference…
between a thorn and a rose
between a thorn and a rose
Love the entire instrumental. It’s syncopated, not repetitive, and you constantly introduced new ideas. Curious to know what sound you used. The words can use some work but I know you’re not finished. This is a great piece.
As always, love the way your drums feel on these tracks. This also really showcases your talents effectively; it feels very you. I dig the electro vibe going on in the drums, and love how well you blended everything together, my only thing is that I think the vocals could come up just the tiniest bit as they almost feel like background right now, but I love the quality of your voice in it; you’ve got a good ear for how the sounds mesh.