Lyrics: Shut down, can anyone believe it Take a look now so you can see it Look around you, what do you see? a 60 year old man acting 3 Put your microphone down now you speak, I don't even know how you stand there yelling and screamin Acting like you know what we're thinking You won't stop at the boarders You won't stop at the seas You won't stop till Earth's 200 degrees Wake up when will we see We live in a society thats not really free Take a stand or get up and leave Say goodbye to the land of the free Sick and tired of hearing you breath Yeah right this is the land of the free!
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Love that you used your voice work at the beginning there, also love the quality of your voice in this; maybe try to mess with it a touch with effects to make it pop a bit more. Your guitar sounds a touch fuzzy when compared with your vocals, it’s a personal preference thing but I think the sound could use a pinch more bite to the flavour. Boost your voice up when you start talking at 2:12, that needs a bit more presence. Absolutely love 2:30. There were a few sounds that I caught in there, sounded like explosions or something (stuff like that); you can bring those out a bit more. They blended in a bit too much I think and lost the impact that they might otherwise have. Looking forward to hearing how this progresses.
Love that you used your voice work at the beginning there, also love the quality of your voice in this; maybe try to mess with it a touch with effects to make it pop a bit more. Your guitar sounds a touch fuzzy when compared with your vocals, it’s a personal preference thing but I think the sound could use a pinch more bite to the flavour. Boost your voice up when you start talking at 2:12, that needs a bit more presence. Absolutely love 2:30. There were a few sounds that I caught in there, sounded like explosions or something (stuff like that); you can bring those out a bit more. They blended in a bit too much I think and lost the impact that they might otherwise have. Looking forward to hearing how this progresses.