I don’t know what you’re talking about about the vocals being rough. It sounds like you might wanna re-record a few sections but you’re voice sounds good on this, legit. You could certainly bring it up in the mix, make it a little warmer on the low end maybe? I really dig the sounds you got on this too, you blended that ish pretty well. I think your main (beat?) could do for a mix up in there but I dig it.
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I don’t know what you’re talking about about the vocals being rough. It sounds like you might wanna re-record a few sections but you’re voice sounds good on this, legit. You could certainly bring it up in the mix, make it a little warmer on the low end maybe? I really dig the sounds you got on this too, you blended that ish pretty well. I think your main (beat?) could do for a mix up in there but I dig it.